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Bones Double Drabble: If Wishes Were Horses (#83 in ATLBU)
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Title: If Wishes Were Horses
Characters:
Brennan, Booth
Rating:
PG
Word Count:
200
Timeline:
Post-ep for 4x04: The Finger in the Nest.
Spoilers:
For 4x04:  The Finger in the Nest.

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If Wishes Were Horses

She surprises him.

After years of coffee, cases, and corpses, Brennan still makes him sit up and blink.

She pokes and prods all his sensitive spots. Hell, she even compares him to a dog. But beneath her squint-speak beats a woman’s heart. Booth tries to never forget that.

He doesn’t have to try very hard. Not when her eyes shine with happiness because of a dog he knows she’ll never get to take home.

She’s one of the good guys; she deserves to have Ripley warming her lap while she reads her anthropology journals. But what people deserve and what they get aren’t always the same, he knows. So does she.

So he breaks the news and her heart, and this time there is no compartmentalizing – just him and her standing beside yet another grave, while she eulogizes a dog. Except she isn’t just talking about the dog, is she? Booth doesn’t need Sweets to tell him that.

They don’t talk much about Zack, but Booth sees his loss in her eyes and hears it in the words she speaks about poor Ripley and his master.

The world isn’t fair. Booth wishes it was – for Parker’s sake and for Brennan’s.



Damn it, I'm still teary. Good little fic, though.

Thank you. It was an excellent and sad ep.

Oh man, you are so in Booth's head.

Love this <3

Thanks, sweetie. It was a sad ep.... Those poor dogs.

Thank you. I know -- it was a sad ep, wasn't it?

Perfect...and exactly what I was thinking re: Zack during the eulogy. Lovely work.

Thank you. Yeah, I definitely read the eulogy as being about more than poor Ripley. But writers tend to have vivid imaginations, so who knows? *g*

amazing.. I won't cry again LOL :)
Definitely about Zack

Thanks, sweetie. *hands you a tissue* It was a heartfelt and sad episode.

Oh, wow... I didn't even catch the possible double meaning of her eulogy.

:(

Excellent post-ep fic.

Thanks very much!

Oh, wow... I didn't even catch the possible double meaning of her eulogy.

I don't write for the show, so who knows whether they intended to reference Zack as well or not. But I definitely read the scene that way.

Just plain beautiful.

You really know how to tug the ol' heartstrings.

(and the world should have been fair for Riley's sake, too *sigh*)

Thanks. :)

(and the world should have been fair for Riley's sake, too *sigh*)

Absolutely. Poor Ripley (and the other dogs) deserved much, much better.

I've just discovered your Bones fic, and I'm disappointed that I never saw it before now! This was so touching. You captured how I felt about the episode, and there's so much emotion and beauty in just those 200 words.

She’s one of the good guys; she deserves to have Ripley warming her lap while she reads her anthropology journals. But what people deserve and what they get aren’t always the same, he knows. So does she.

that was my favorite part. Ohh, it just broke my heart.

I love that you noticed the parallel between Ripley and Zack in Brennan's eulogy: I thought it was just me being a crazy Zack fan, so it was nice to see that someone else recognized that too.

Wow. I could go on, but I didn't mean to write you a mini-novel here, so I'm going to cut myself off. This was a wonderful read, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. :)

Excellent story. I'm still teary from the ep.

Thank you very much. And I know what you mean; it was a sad ep.

Oh, wow. Lovely little epilogue to the episode. I hadn't thought of the parallel with Zack, and now I am wondering why. Gorgeous.

You know how when you're playing with a puppy and you scritch em juuuust so and they do that little puppy wriggle of joy thing that they do? That's how your fic makes me feel :) Thank you for pointing out the subtext of Bones' eulogy, I can't believe I didn't catch it.

This is fabulous. You clever thing you... *twirls away still on a Bones-induced high*

So very much said, so few words, so well-done. (as always)

Those two actors - DB and ED - say so much without words; they've been working together so intensely these last 3-4 years, that we can understand their silences.

Poor Brennan: she finally opens her heart, and it gets broken...again. I feel her pain, and I want her -very, very, much - to have a companion that she loves openly, vulnerably, and without fear. [sigh.] I <3 her.

Man, that episode made me cry. A lot.

And then, you've written these beautiful words that I waited to read, and I cry some more.

Pretty.

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