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Falling (Ficlet #51)
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Title: Falling (Ficlet #51)
Series:  All That Lies Between Us
Word Count: 150 (a drabble and a half.) ;)
Rating:  M or R
Characters:  Booth, Brennan
Timeline: Future
Spoilers: Oblique reference to something in Death in the Saddle.
Prompt:
Shift  (Taken from open_on_sunday, a Jossverse drabble community.)
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely mean to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Brennan's leg slipped from around his hip, and she dragged her foot over his calf. A satisfied sigh fell from her lips, and though his arousal was still sharp, Booth smiled. “Good?” he asked, feathering his fingers over her warm cheek.

“Mmhmm.” She took his hand, looking down at their linked fingers. A series of emotions shifted over her face so quickly he couldn’t identify them all.

He waited.

“You… were right,” she said, gazing at him with eyes so deep he thought he could fall into them and never hit bottom.

“About what?”

Without answering, Brennan wrapped her leg around him and pushed against his chest so he rolled onto his back. She straddled him, lowering herself till he slid back inside her. When she leaned down, he threaded his fingers through the dark cloud of her hair.

“About making love,” she said against his lips, swallowing his moan.


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Couldn't quote a favourite line, as they are all absolutely perfect. Beautiful stuff :)

*squishes you* Thank you! :)

*sigh*

Your writing makes me believe that this is already happening in canon.


What a lovely thing to say. Thank you very much.

Once again, I really think that with creative camara angles (but no silly "sheets") they could actually film this. Heck, we've all seen more explicit on TV before. And this would just sizzle... because there is that human connection quality, not just skin for the sake of ratings.

Absolutely beautiful.

If only we could see in the show *sigh*
I miss them.

Besos

That totally made me smile.

I skipped this, why don't your entries appear in my friends page? This could be a case for Mulder and Scully...

The fic... awwww... I love the way you write them because they seem to make love with their gazes or hands holding. But this time they made love and Brennan realized that it's different with Booth, with him it's all the real thing.

Nice, nice... ^_^

That's a beautiful image. I could read it over and over and never get tired of it.

Edited at 2008-03-12 08:50 pm (UTC)

“About making love,” she said against his lips, swallowing his moan.

OMG.. you kill me with your fic.. Awesome.

Wow. My heart flipped over and bounced around a bit, and I had to catch my breath when it hit me what she was actually saying to him. I say again, WOW! How you can say so much with so few words...

Why can this not be canon? Mmmm. It's very them. Or it will be them...whenever they do get together.

You're ficlet is just too good... Gah *sigh*

The details make the fic (err... in this case, ficlet). Lovely.

*thud*

That is all.


Exactly. ;)

It's just... wow.

wondermous! And I don't just say that to anyone! Thank you for sharing and it was just a few lines, but they were erotic and lovely.

Sid

guh, perfect. I know this won't happen, but if (when?) they do finally get there act together and have sex, I desperately want them to refer back to that conversation. Expect that the writers probably barely even remember writing it, so...!

Oh well, I shall just re-read this over and over instead. :)

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