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Bones Fic: Proximity (2/2)
B/B Across the Table

Title:Proximity (2/2) [Complete]
Chapter Word Count: 2545
Pairing:  Brennan/Booth
Takes place not long after The Santa in the Slush.
Spoilers: For The Santa in the Slush.
Summary:  An unexpected sight raises some unsettling issues in Brennan's mind.
Feedback: is always appreciated. If criticizing, please be constructive.
A/N: My note is after the end of this chapter.

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I've got this feeling things will be alright...Collapse )

Sweet and fitting and lovely. Thanks for posting this!

Thank you for this. You have very pretty writing. Very emotive and detailed. I love how she used his tie to pull him closer, played with the hair at the nape of his neck, and loved his hand on her back. Thanks for sharing your stories!

very sweet and fun! you stayed true to the characters! love it

lovely work on this fic...funny and yet strong and important for their relationship...It was really like watching a scene from an episode.very very good job on this one!!Bye for now...

This was just what I needed to make me smile. Life being what it is, I really needed a smile. As always, very true to character, and I could see it playing out in my head. Love how she started out watching Jack and Angela, and how it clicked for her when Booth stood in her space. Excellent, as always.

I absolutely LOVED the story! It's so cute and adorable at parts and angsty at other parts, and that's what makes a perfect story IMO. :) Very well done, and thanks for making me smile :D

Oh, happy. I just finished both parts, and it was a lovely break in an otherwise dull day.

Question: Why isn't this in the series? ;-p

Very in character... Great job!!! =D

Edited at 2008-10-20 09:22 pm (UTC)

Awwww I love it. Lovely and simple end. Though if I hacn't know you didn't want to write more of this I'd be begging for more right now, but I still feel that this is a good ending even if it could be continued.

I totally love the toilet paper bits. And going from throwing TP at him to kissing him I love when characters do that!! It's how things do occasionally work out here in the real world, I love when my characters end up doing that!

Great job hun! Awesome fic to read before bed.

mmmm shippy B/B-ness! Just what I wanted on my birthday :)

This is sooooooo perfect *squeeee* After reading part one I wasn't too sure where you would head with this story but you did a brilliant job. I love the bickering - it's so in character and then finally she wants to punch him (LOL!) but kisses him instead. *le sigh* And they can finally talk properly - admit a small something, not much but sometime. Booth doesn't push but is honest and that reassures Brennan.

Loved his calling her Bones over and over. She does so love it! I actually read another fic a few days ago where there was brief mention of it too - something like she couldn't remember when she had stopped being annoyed by the nickname and started to love it.....so true. :D

Love the ending too - it's a date but it could just be them having dinner as normal therefore no pressure. Very smooth by Booth.

Yay! Thanks for finishing it ;-) Awesome.

Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you so much Lerdo :D
A perfect ending . Tender and funny .
Thank you for telling me you had posted it :D

No problem! Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

Wow again!

This is the single most perfect IC Bones fic I have ever read, hands down, and I'm not exaggerating:
"What this?"
"This this!"
Nail on the head with the dialogue, I do so wish this was a real scene on the show!