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Bones Fic: Proximity (2/2)
B/B Across the Table

Title:Proximity (2/2) [Complete]
Chapter Word Count: 2545
Pairing:  Brennan/Booth
Takes place not long after The Santa in the Slush.
Spoilers: For The Santa in the Slush.
Summary:  An unexpected sight raises some unsettling issues in Brennan's mind.
Feedback: is always appreciated. If criticizing, please be constructive.
A/N: My note is after the end of this chapter.

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I've got this feeling things will be alright...Collapse )

Well, lerdo, it's been a long time since I spam-posted all your stories. I gave up the show for lost during season four but I'm forcing myself to swallow the righteous indignation and catch up with the episodes I missed. There's a lot of crap in S4 but Booth and Bones are still there, buried beneath it, so here I am.

I'm delighted to see you have more trust in the show than I did and you've kept writing. You know and express these characters so well and this story is a perfect example. Brennan's ruffled emotions from the complications her involvement with Booth have introduced into her life are perfectly articulated with her singular logical voice. You always do an excellent job at writing in unique physical cues (i.e. the "new" way Booth touches Brennan's back) that really draw the reader into the story. What I particularly like is how easily I can see this bickering between them escalating into the moment where each no longer wants to hide behind professional obligations. Very well done, as always.

Oh, and here's a friendly and patient nudge regarding "Presbyopia." Part 2 says 2/3, but I can't find part 3. I never knew how vital sexy Booth-in-glasses was to my survival until just now, haha.