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Bones fic update: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (4/?)
Title: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (4/?)
Chapter Title: Blackmail Material
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: NC-17 (Do not read if you are underage, or if frank language/sexuality offend you.)
Spoilers: Through 2x11 (season 2, episode 11)
Summary: Thoughts of Booth are keeping Brennan awake at night. Question is, what is she going to do about it? This story is set in Season 2, after Episode 11, though I may have changed the exact month.

Click here for fic index/previous chapters
Prologue & Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

I got here through a link from a link from a link (you know how it goes), and I just have to say...wow. I haven't actually read het fanfic in so long that it isn't even funny, but this...is great. I love how you build the tension. Lovely. And I realize this is slightly incoherent, so you have my apologies for that. :)

Cannot wait to see more of this...and your other WIP's, too. :D

Welcome -- however you got here. :) Thanks for taking a chance on this fic, given that you haven't read het fic in a while. I hope you enjoyed it and any of my other fics that you might have taken a peek at.

As for tension, those two have it in spades.

You were completely coherent, and I'm thrilled to read your feedback. Thank you very much!

*fans self* that was incredibly hot. I've never read such a detailed description of cunnilingus. It was fantastic!

what book doesn't booth want hodgins to know about?

*fans self* that was incredibly hot.

;) Thanks. I suspect those two would be pretty fucking hot together.

what book doesn't booth want hodgins to know about?

The copy of The Encyclopedia of Conspiracy Theories that's on Booth's night-stand; it's mentioned in the second paragraph.

lexical choice

Thanks for using the word 'erection'. It's a nice word, clinical and erotic. I was a bit worried that I might have to read the word 'member' or even 'swollen member' and I would have had to groan... and not in a good way.

And along the same lines, thanks for not directly describing size or girth, etc... It was nice to read about 'it' in action as opposed to reading it described as some museum art piece. Theory verses applied, I guess. I prefer applied. :)

Oh, dear Lord, girl. That was better than ANYTHING I could have ever expected from ANY fic! Absoultely fabulous!

Criticism? How could anybody complain about THIS? Guh! *gives you a Booth!Plushie* He's extra muscle-y. :D