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Bones fic update: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (5/?)
Hmm!Booth - lerdo
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Title: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (5/?)
ChapterTitle: Runaway Train
Chapter: 5/? [WIP]
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: NC-17 (Do not read if you are underage, or if frank language/sexuality offend you.)
Spoilers: Through 2x11 (season 2, episode 11)
Summary: Thoughts of Booth are keeping Brennan awake at night. Question is, what is she going to do about it? This story is set in Season 2, after Episode 11, though I may have changed the exact month.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

Click here for fic index/previous chapters
Prologue & Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4



first: i love the new layout.

second: i'm on the process of reading several of your fics ... i don't know i'm in to each of them so i'd say you update them as you been doing till now. one, then the other, and the other, and again the first one...like that lol

last but not least, i want to keep reading more and more!! just want to know how things on the lab will get. i so imagine them inside the suv discussing all that! it's amazing.

good job, as always.

(:

i love the new layout.

Thank you. Photoshop was feeling neglected. :) I love that scene with Booth and Brennan. The other two characters are Jack and Liz from 30 Rock, an absolutely drop-dead-funny show my husband and I just started watching. (Just ignore that last sentence if you recognized them already.)

i'd say you update them as you been doing till now.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts; I was genuinely curious to hear how other people felt about that.

last but not least, i want to keep reading more and more!!

That's fantastic. :) Thank you. I promise I'll give you more to read soon.




haha, i love them like this.


amazing job. update soon please! im not sure how much more waiting i can take (:

Thanks for reading and feeding. Booth and Brennan are funny. *pets them both*

update soon please! im not sure how much more waiting i can take (:

So I guess you're feeling a bit like Booth is right now, huh? *g*

I promise I'll be back with more soon.


Oh, this made me giggle. I love the banter, which IMO is one of the best things about the B/B relationship in canon.

I actually happen to be reading more than one of your stories, and I say go where the muse takes you...and hopefully it doesn't take you far far way from what your are working on now. *grins*

Glad this chapter made you laugh.

I love the banter, which IMO is one of the best things about the B/B relationship in canon.

Totally agree; the way they talk to each other on the show is hysterical. And kinda hot. ;) I'm a sucker for those pseudo-adversarial partnerships.

Thank you, Lizz, for reading, commenting, and weighing in on the one vs. multiple stories question. And I'll try to get that email to you on Monday. This wkend promises to be pretty busy.

If I had a gift-wrapped Booth, I sure as hell wouldn't share him. ;)

*grumble-grumble* Well, I was going to tell you I liked your fic, but now I'm not so sure... just kidding! I just read all 5 chaps and I love it! Great job expanding upon their partnership and keeping it in character! (and hot!)

I love your icon.

Hot and in character; thank you very much! :)

Ok. I'm a lurker... coming out of lurkdom. I absolutely adore this fic. Booth is so carefree--it's great to see this side of him. Especially when he turns the tables on Brennan and has her stammering.
Loved the update, can't wait for the next :)

*waves hello* Welcome! Happy to have you here. Thanks for delurking. I promise I don't bite.

I'm so glad you like this fic. It's been a joy to write.

Especially when he turns the tables on Brennan and has her stammering.

Oh yeah, that man gives as good as he gets. (Sorry, I think that came out pervier than I intended.) :P

Now Bones wants to have sex again, but it was Booth's idea to make her want to repeat. Booth is so good at psycology!!

*grins* Booth's no idiot. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Hi, I'm relatively new to LJ and mostly just lurk around some communities in the buffy & angel fandom, but I came across the naughty_bones community and this story and its great. I haven't read that much Bones fic, but you may just have inspired me to check out some more.

Thanks


I haven't read that much Bones fic, but you may just have inspired me to check out some more.

Come on in; the water's warm. :)

I'm relatively new to LJ and mostly just lurk around some communities in the buffy & angel fandom

I suspect a lot of Bones fans, myself included, are also Joss Whedon fans. Buffy and Angel were fantastic shows.

I'm glad you decided to delurk. :) Thank you for making the effort to read and let me know you're having fun reading this story.

Hi! Just read all the chapters to this story and I really like it! It's funny, hot and in character. I love that they are having sex (sort of) and still bicker away. Because that's totally what they would do in the show. The banter must not die! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter :)

Hi. :) I'm glad you're liking this story so far and finding it "funny, hot and in character." I can't ask for more than that!

I see the bickering and banter as a pretty core part of how Booth and Brennan relate to each other; it's like extended foreplay. ;) (Plus it's just damned fun to write.) They definitely have serious, banter-free moments, too, though.

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment; I enjoyed reading your thoughts.

;) I bet that's along the lines of what Booth's asking himself -- every 5 minutes.

Yay

(Anonymous)
So I'm new to the whole Bones world. Really, I watched the first two seasons in about 5 days. This fic is *fantastic*. Besides who could regret waking up to a naked Booth? Please keep writing, you're awesome.
*Amber

Woohoo! A bones marathon sounds great. :) It's a fun show, isn't it?

Besides who could regret waking up to a naked Booth?

No one, as far as I'm concerned. ;)

Please keep writing, you're awesome.

Thanks, Amber. I've been working on an update for this story for the past two days. It's turning into a monster chapter in terms of length, for me anyway, which is why I haven't posted it yet. With luck, it'll be up sometime today.

Thank you for reading and feeding!

Please for the love of God (and Seeley Booth's cock) up date soon!

:) Thanks for your interest. The next chapter is already up right here.

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:) Glad both made you laugh.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

I'm just getting into Bones and went looking for some fic and found this. Really enjoying your stuff, and I absolutely had to comment on this one because not only is it hot, the idea of Brennan talking about thoracic vertebrae in her sleep absolutely cracked me up. I think I hurt something laughing so hard. Can't wait for more. :)

Edited at 2007-11-13 09:55 pm (UTC)

*waves hello* Nice to "meet" you. :) I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. And I have to admit I'm partial to the "thoracic vertebrae" comment, so thanks for mentioning it.

I think I hurt something laughing so hard.

Perhaps you need Booth to come over and take care of you. ;)

Which episodes of the show have you seen so far?

Thanks for taking the time to comment!

booth brennan ff what would you do if i kisses you

(Anonymous)
This piece is well written. I would like it if you would continue this series. jamie

Re: booth brennan ff what would you do if i kisses you

Hi, Jamie. I do plan to continue this, but I want to finish another fic, Unwell, first.

Thanks for your interest.

Everything this woman did turned him on. Oh, yessss. I think that's pretty clear from Season 1, Episode 1.1. :-)

He shook his head and left the room; man, was he in trouble. Well, duh! Again, going back to Season 1, Episode 1.1: when she left the target range, and he "shot his gun", he was in trouble.... and he has been, ever since. :-)

"Face it, Bones, I rocked your world." Oh, true; so true. He's been rocking her world for so. very. long.

Late in catching up on the reading, but so very delicious, so very in character. Of course, we'll never SEE this, but it's just so THEM.


Hi there! I'm going through the old LJ and looking for missed comments, and here you are. Sorry I missed this back in December. Nonetheless, I'm happy you enjoyed this, Makd. And I even got the icon of honor. *g* Your support means a lot to me. Thank you.