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Bones Fic: Unwell (1/9)
Hmm!Booth - lerdo
Title: Unwell (1/9)
Chapter: 1
Chapter Title: Give me pancakes.
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: PG
Summary: "Yup, the mighty Temperance Brennan was sick."
Notes:  This is pure, unadulterated fluff. If you don't like fluff, don't read this. Takes place after Season 3, Episode 4. No spoilers in this part, but there may be some in future parts.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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loved it!!!

This was fantastic!! Fluff...when done right is so adorable, especially for this pairing, and you did more than a great job with it! You made characters stay believable, without staying in a comfort zone which is awesome. Which I think is so important for a story to be successful. If that makes sense. :) Anyways, this was a great read and I cant wait for more!

Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm glad Booth and Brennan seemed in character to you. And I think I do understand what you're saying -- you want fic to let characters stretch beyond the bounds of the source material, but in a plausible way. Feel free to correct me if I misunderstood.

Anyway, thank you for making the effort to read and comment on this. That makes me ridiculously happy. :)

Have a good wkend!

I really like this...nice idea! I wish this would happen in the series, so that we could see Booth take care of Brennan...wouldn't that be nice?

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) And yes, I would love to see that on the show. Booth has a mother hen side to him when it comes to Brennan. ;)

Hehe. This reminds me of how much I love good fluff, and this is definitely good.

Great job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. :D

Why thank you. I'm happy you liked this and thought it was good fluff. :)

I'll be back with an update soon.

FLuff! Booth taking care of Brennan! And banter, despite the sick! These are a few of my favorite things...

*grins* Nice start. I will enjoy reading more of this.

Hello again. Your icon is *guh*. *pets the pretty*

Glad I could provide a few of your favorite things. :) Thanks for reading and feeding!

Aww, I love it. That last bit "I hate you"/"I know you do" hehehe. Priceless.

:) Thanks for letting me know you liked it.

That last bit "I hate you"/"I know you do" hehehe. Priceless.

Can't you just see them having that exchange? ;)

Nice job with this! If you're taking requests, a nice lap nuzzle would be a great way to go. :)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :) If I can get the "lap nuzzle" to work, I'll weave it in. Thanks for the suggestion.

Yay! It may have been done a million times, but I've been waiting for someone to do a 'Bones' take on that particular storyline. This is great: realistic and true to character. You have Brennan's reaction spot on. The story so far is perfectly balanced - sweet, but not toothache inducing. I'm looking forward to the next part. Thank you;)

Thank you. :) When it comes to stories, I'm a big believer in this quote from Mark Twain: "“There is no such thing as a new idea. It is impossible. We simply take a lot of old ideas and put them into a sort of mental kaleidoscope. We give them a turn and they make new and curious combinations. We keep on turning and making new combinations indefinitely; but they are the same old pieces of colored glass that have been in use through all the ages.” IMHO, it's all in the execution. Every writer brings something unique to the table. My $.02.

The story so far is perfectly balanced - sweet, but not toothache inducing.

I was hoping it would be just that.

Thanks again for reading and feeding.


You must write again! I havn't found any other fanfic as MOVING as yours!

Thank you for your kind words; I'm touched that you think that. :)

I am juggling multiple fics at the moment, but I'm writing every chance I get. I'll update this as soon as I can. I'm happy you're so eager for the next part.

AWE! FLuff is what i need rite now! Just found this fic and i love it!!

Booth is soo sweet ^^

I'm happy to fill your need for fluff. :)

Just found this fic and i love it!!

Thank you. I'm happy you're having fun reading this, and yes, Booth is a sweetheart.

So I just found your archive of stories and I have loved everything I've read so far (mostly random drabbles). You have a wonderful style and the characterization is spot on.

What I loved in this particular chapter: Jackass. There she was, puking her guts out, and he was pondering her bralessness. Really classy. It made laugh not just because it was funny, but again because it seems like something he could be thinking.

I can't wait to read more; I just hope I don't overload myself :)

Edited at 2008-09-21 05:08 am (UTC)