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Fic update: Unwell (4/9)
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Title: Unwell (4/9)
Chapter: 4
Chapter Title: Cuts like a knife.
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Yup, the mighty Temperance Brennan was sick."
Notes:  Takes place after Season 3, Episode 4. Minor reference to something mentioned in Intern in the Incinerator.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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that was great! leave it to brennan to make a big deal out of everything. i love their bickering, though. can't wait to read more!

Yeah, Brennan won't go down with a fight. :)

i love their bickering, though.

Me too. They have it down to an art.

Thank you for reading and feeding!



That was great. I love all your stories. Next chapter please?

Thank you, Emily. It warms me to the tips of my toes that you like my stories. :)

Mmm, sandalwood, that's so Brennan.

I love sarcastic!Bones, not to mention Booth being a 'real man' - that's great. And I really like that even while Booth is there taking care of Brennan, she's still doing her best to return the favour and fix his cut! Awww.

I'm glad to have something to read during the interminable wait for the next ep! :D

Mmm, sandalwood, that's so Brennan.

Thanks. I thought so. :)

I love sarcastic!Bones, not to mention Booth being a 'real man' - that's great.

They do manage to keep each other on their toes. *g*

I'm glad to have something to read during the interminable wait for the next ep!

Very happy to oblige. And I hear you on the "interminable wait." I wish the studios would just cave already and give the writers what they deserve.

Thank you for commenting; I loved reading your reactions to this chapter.

Your fics just simply RULE! Please, please continue this and take them sparing !!! One of my favorite set-ups and I'm beggin this as a request is for him to get her under him on the mat. Oh, please. ;)

Your fics just simply RULE!

Thanks, sweetie. *blushes* I'm happy they entertain you.

While the sparring set-up is probably a massive cliché, I'll be honest here and admit that I've been itching to try writing it. I don't know if it'll work in this fic, since she's sick, but maybe elsewhere... I'll keep your request in mind. ;)

Thank you for commenting!


Orange Sandalwood Three-In-One: Body Wash, Bubble Bath, and Shampoo. That's so very Brennan: womanly, fragrant, and profoundly practical. Who knows when she'll be called to identify bodies in some distant, primitive location? :-) The perfect choice.

She'd been kidnapped and buried alive. She'd probably been terrified, facing the possibility of her own premature death. But her note had mentioned none of that. ITA. Practical, rational, worried about Angela and Zack and Booth, but calm for herself. I adore her.

Love the last three lines like pancakes. :-)




I loved your riff on Brennan's choice of body wash. Very insightful. :)

I adore her.

Me too. I'm glad you feel that way because I think a lot of people love Booth but are lukewarm on Brennan. I think they're both fascinating and lovable, and I want to squish them. Even though they aren't real.

Love the last three lines like pancakes. :-)

That's high praise indeed. Poor Booth never got his pancakes...

Thank you, my friend, for reading and commenting.

*lovesloveslovesloveslovesloves*

"Aren't you going to kiss it and make it better?"

HA! She should have :D I could just imagine the look on Booth's face... :P

Great work!

I could just imagine the look on Booth's face...

I think it would have looked something like his expression in last night's epi. *g*

Glad you're loving this. :) Thanks for reading and feeding.

This is the exact kind of fluff I needed to tid me over until tonights episode of Bones. (Only an hour and a half! lol)

"Aren't you going to kiss it and make it better?"
Haha, this is so Booth.

Aww...Thank you. I'm happy to have provided you with a distraction while you waited for Santa in the Slush.

Haha, this is so Booth.

Glad you saw it that way, too.

Loved it, loved it, loved it!

"Is this really necessary?" he groused, secretly pleased by her fussing over him.

lol Booth's such a guy :)

Can't wait for the next installment!

Piper

Booth's such a guy :)

Thank heaven for that. *g* *hums Whatta Man*

Glad you're still enjoying this, Piper. Thanks for reading and feeding!

I love this! I love Booth daydreaming about Brennan and how that doesn't stop him from teasing her. I love how he wants to cook for her. I love how she insists on bandaging his boo-boo. And I especially loved how his brain disconnected from his mouth at the end.

That's a lot of love. Thank you so much. :)

And I especially loved how his brain disconnected from his mouth at the end.

Did it ever! ;)

That was an extremely fun romp through Booth's head! And you got the "voices" exactly right. I'd feel bad for Bones for feeling horrible, but I almost feel worse for Bones. He's got all this internal tension built up. I'm glad to see you updated!

Thanks, Mel. :) I hear voices...Sorry, really, really bad joke. :/ I'm with you on feeling worse for Booth. He's got all those pesky feelings bubbling up. Something's gotta give.

Thanks for commenting!

Okay, so love, love, love, love, love this story. It seems to get better with each chapter- please update ASAP!

*g* I love that you love this story. Seriously. Thank you.

Thanks. Glad you're enjoying this story enough to want more.

This was just simply fantastic.

I hesitate to call it fluff since it is so well written and perfectly characterised.

Marvelous job.

Have been reading since chapter one and each chapter is better than the last.

Keep up the great writing!!

*waves hello* I'm glad you delurked. :)

Thank you so very much! I'm really pleased you're enjoying this. Booth and Brennan have swept me off my feet, so it makes me happy when someone thinks I've characterized them well.

A couple of people have told me they don't think this is fluff, which is fine by me. I just don't know how categorize it. *g*

Thank you again for delurking in order to comment. I appreciate it. Much as I love it, writing is a lonely business. Feedback makes it less so. :)

That WHOLE time with the knife, I was waiting for him to cut himself. Agh!!!!

STOP MAKING ME PICTURE BRENNAN IN THE BATH!!! IT'S REALLY REALLY DISTRACTING!!!!! But enjoyable.

This is an exhausted and pissed off me comment.

That WHOLE time with the knife, I was waiting for him to cut himself.

But of course. Booth's mind is elsewhere.

STOP MAKING ME PICTURE BRENNAN IN THE BATH!!!

I cannot control your brain. ;)

This is an exhausted and pissed off me comment.

Go get some rest, pet. Everything ok?

Thanks for commenting!


ahahah xD The kiss thing was so funny!
Just imagining their faces xD
Booth all smily and Brennan all "Oh pliz! C'mon!" xD
Great job.. once again! As always.. :D
Waiting for more :P