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Fic update: Unwell (5/9)
Temperance - lerdo
only_more_love
Title: Unwell (5/9)
Chapter: 5
Chapter Title: Dare you to move.
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: PG-13
Summary: "Yup, the mighty Temperance Brennan was sick."
Notes:  Takes place after Season 3, Episode 4. Minor reference to something mentioned in Intern in the Incinerator.
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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OMG! Such a question...

Ya know, you've got the voices and characters down pat. Such a pleasure to read, so credible with canon.


Such a question...

Oh yeah. It will be interesting to hear what she says.

Such a pleasure to read, so credible with canon.

You're very kind. Thank you!




Oh, Booth.

Ooh cliffy. I always say that I don't like cliffies *coughs*butisecretlydo*coughs*

Can I friend you?

I always say that I don't like cliffies *coughs*butisecretlydo*coughs*

I can understand the love/hate relationship. *g*

Can I friend you?

Absolutely! The more, the merrier. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting; I appreciate it.

As always, great work! :D
Loved it!
Can't wait to see the next chapture :P

...and finally pressed his thumb against the pillowy softness of her mouth. Awww. Yes!!! *giggle*
And Booth reading a romance novel is hilarious.
I love this fic.

Besos

Glad this chapter made you laugh. ;) I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading and then commenting!

ouch! way to be subtle, booth! can't wait to see brennan's response. we all know how she likes to run when things get tough...will she tell him the truth or run?

ouch! way to be subtle, booth!

Subtlety is usually lost on Brennan. *g* Booth decided to go right for the jugular, this time.

will she tell him the truth or run?

Excellent question. ;)

Thanks for taking the time to comment!

IAW witchofthedogs.

Ouch.

But AHAHAHA BEST LINE EVR! -

"...But what if I win? What if you don't have the nerve to kiss it?..."</i You *know* where my mind went right then. Speaking of that, RLY RLY NEEDING YOUR SMUT FIC NOW!!!!! Fabulous, as always. I think you got a teeny bit distracted from her being sick (not as a subject but as a factor) but it still rocked. I only give teeny criticism because that's all there is to give. SO LUCKY TO HAVE YOU WRITING!!!!!!

Of course I know where your mind went. *g* Pervert.

Speaking of that, RLY RLY NEEDING YOUR SMUT FIC NOW!!!!!

Your icon is making me giggle. Ok, so you've got a hankering for some good lovin', eh? Maybe I can whip together a oneshot PWP. Of course, I've never WRITTEN any PWP before. Hm. Challenges are good. All right, I'm not promising anything, but I'll see what I can do, since you've asked (begged, pleaded) so nicely. :D

I think you got a teeny bit distracted from her being sick (not as a subject but as a factor)

*nods* Thank you for telling me. That's a valid criticism.

Hope you finally brushed your teeth, wench! ;)

Great stuff, YOU ARE TRULY THE BEST!

(Anonymous)
Hi, just found your stuff last night, and I could go on and on all day over each and every line and why it was so great, so IC, so hot, so funny, so deliciously smutty, etc... Even when you lament your lack of focus or are unsure of whether or not you love/hate a piece, know that your imagination is beyond appreciated. It is revered. The joy you bring us fans is incalculable, a concept which even Zach can attest to its rarity. ;)

I want to also extend my sympathies/support for the personal challenges in your life. I am certainly part of the adoring fanbase that hopes you can find some peace.

Quick typo comment: "Cold terror blew threw him when he realized..." threw vs. through?

Write when you can. We'll be waiting for you.

Cheers!




ciao, bella!

As a general comment, I love all your fic (which I have just stumbled most ungraciously upon, thanks to several late nights of internet soul-searching). My plea is for you to find some superhuman abilities and update pretty much everything very soon.

Amazing woman, amazing writer, amazing spirit...you have written the beloveds and their voices in such a beautiful and caring way. Made me sit up and take notice about a wonderful premise.