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Fic: Tied Up and Twisted (Double Drabble #7)
B/B Mirror Mirror on the Wall - lerdo
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Title: Tied Up and Twisted
Series:  All That Lies Between Us
Word Count: 200
Characters:
Seeley Booth, Temperance Brennan
Prompt: Tony/Roxie (Thanks, highvoltage11!)
Story Notes:
The following is a double drabble—200 word vignette—set during The Woman in the Sand, when Brennan exits the bathroom wearing the black dress Booth picked out for her. Yeah, you know which dress I'm talking about.
Spoilers: For The Woman in the Sand.

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Booth slips on the hat, eyes his reflection. The door opens, revealing Brennan, wearing the dress he chose.

"Like this?" she asks, and he forgets fight clubs, Special Agent Seeley Booth, and Dr. Temperance Brennan—and remembers he's a man, she's a woman. God, is she a woman.

The black fabric makes her skin a beacon, and he can't look away. He wants. Oh, he wants:

To breathe her breath and swallow the words that spill from her lips.

To rip the straps from her shoulders and fill his hands with the weight of her breasts.

To slide the dress up milk-white thighs and leave it bunched around her waist as he pins her against the wall.

To make her watch them in the mirror, over his shoulder, as he buries his face in her neck and himself inside her and makes her beg for him.

To discover whether he's “Seeley” or “Booth” when she shatters in his arms.

Tony. Roxie. Booth. Brennan. Who are they? Just a man. Just a woman.

So why, if there is any justice in the world, can't she be his?

But she is still waiting for an answer. He swallows. "Yeah, like that."

 


Oh God. It's hot and tender and only in a few words. Definitely that was what Booth expression was hidding.

Loved it. Great job.

*scolds you* Shouldn't you be resting instead of surfing, young lady? How are you feeling?

So glad you liked this; thank you. *hugs*

ITA with everything pinktealeaves has already said.

(just look at the expression in the icon...it says it all.) :-)

(just look at the expression in the icon...it says it all.)

*Looks and smiles*

As always, thank you. :)

To discover whether he's “Seeley” or “Booth” when she shatters in his arms.

Ooh, excellent question. I often wonder that when reading fics. What would Brennan call him, if she said his name in that moment?
*love*

Thank you, Becc. :) IMHO, she would still call him Booth because that's how she knows him and that's who he is to her. I like to think that if they officially became a couple, they would still only use each other's first names on a very rare basis. But that's just my hope/opinion. I know some fic writers choose to have them call each other Seeley and Temperance as soon as something overtly romantic occurs. Different strokes for different folks. ;)

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Thanks for the prompt, Court. It was fun; I'd never considered the Tony/Roxie angle in anything I'd written. You definitely gave me something different to think about, so I'm thrilled you enjoyed this tiny glimpse into poor Booth's mind during that unbelievably hot scene.

Thank you!

It's hot in herrre! :P
To discover whether he's “Seeley” or “Booth” when she shatters in his arms
I love this part. Wonder the same.


LOL Nelly!

Wonder the same.

Maybe one day we'll find out. ;)

Thanks for the feed, Foxy.

Yes!!! It’s sooo hot!!!
I love that scene, Booth’s face is… awesome. And your drabble is so perfect as the scene.

To make her watch them in the mirror, over his shoulder, as he buries his face in her neck and himself inside her and makes her beg for him.
OH-MY-GOD!!! *die*

Besos

*twirls you* Thanks, sweetie. The look on his face during that scene is to die for, isn't it? ;)

Oooh, it's like concentrated hotness :)

Ooh, I think I have to bury my face in the snow now, that was so hot. Definitely a perfect, naughty little thought process.

:) Thank you very much for reading and commenting; I'm glad you thought this was hot. That scene was very inspiring. Every time I see the look on his face when she comes out wearing that dress...Wow.


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Poor, frustrated Booth. *g* I loved the look on his face in that scene.

LOVE the mirror imagery ;) Definitely something I can see them doing. Haha.

Oh yeah. Me too. :D

Thanks for the feed, Sam!

Holy SH**. This was just 100% perfect! Great job with each word chosen, each word italicized/emphasized. You don't waste words at all in this. I'm going to have to go back and read more of your fics! :)

Thanks very much. I loved writing this, so I'm happy you enjoyed reading it. I thought it was a really powerful scene; Booth's expression spoke volumes. :)

god, how do you use so few words to convey SO MUCH?

i love it. <3 to death. even though it's just a drabble, it's so amazing. <3

Thank you very much for your kind words. The look on Booth's face just hit me; I had to do something with it. :)

Wonderful, as always. I've been reading all of your fics over the last few days and they are all gorgeous . I love the drabbles and how they are beautifully simple but can still make such an impact. This is no exception.

To discover whether he's “Seeley” or “Booth” when she shatters in his arms.

There should definitely be a drabble that answers that question xD

and if the title is a reference to Crash Into Me by DMB then you have just made my day because it is one of my all time songs.

Hanging out for more. Annie

Hi, Annie. :) I love writing Booth and Brennan, so I'm thrilled that you've enjoyed reading my little drabbles and fics about them. I used to dislike drabbles, but I've come to appreciate them over time. They can be a bit like poetry.

There should definitely be a drabble that answers that question xD

*g* I'll keep your request in mind. ;)

and if the title is a reference to Crash Into Me by DMB then you have just made my day because it is one of my all time songs.

The title is indeed a reference to DMB's Crash Into Me. That song gets me every time—just like the look on Booth's face during that scene. *sigh*


Thanks! So glad you enjoyed this. :)

*fans* oh yeah. Definitely got Booth's thoughts right there. That was such an awesome scene..

Thanks, Ren. :) Yeah, Booth's expression in that scene is priceless.

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