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Fic: Tear in Your Hand (1/1)
B/B Touch - lerdo
Title:  Tear in Your Hand (1/1)
A/N: This is another one I intended to write for the Porn Battle, but it's too long, so I've failed. Again.
ETA:  When I said I failed, I only meant that I'd failed to write something porny in the 4300 character range.  *g*  But thanks for the reassurances anyway; you've made my day. :)
Prompt: Knife
Timeframe: This is set sometime after Santa in the Slush.
Rating: M
Summary:  Booth and Brennan cross the line.

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Ok. I don't even know what to say

Your fic is amazing. I'm speechless! I can't find words to describe it :D

Speechless is good; I'll take that. ;)

Thanks, Sara. *smooches you*

I've been reading your fics for a while, but finally decided to stop lurking and comment! This was amazing. You really have the characters down and every concept you come up with seems true to them. I find myself checking this journal every day to see if you've written more. :)

Well I'm glad you decided to de-lurk and say hello. ;) I promise I don't bite.

I love writing Bones fic, so it always makes me happy when someone says they enjoyed or were entertained by one of my fics.

Thank you for taking the time to comment. I really do appreciate it.

I find myself checking this journal every day to see if you've written more. :)

Oh, thank you! :)

This is the most beautiful thing that I've ever read.
It’s hot and sweet and sad and soft and cute and shiny and dark (yes, both of them) and pure love.

Booth is tender and adorable and so sexy. And he loves her so much that hurts him. He kills for her… and he would die for her.
Brennan’s pain makes me cry. Her angst is so hard. She needs him because she needs to feel alive. And in those moments the independent Temperance Brennan needs Booth’s cares and his sweet kiss.

Your Booth and Brennan make me happy. Always.

She pulls his hand from her face and licks the kanji on his wrist. She sucks the skin into her mouth, and he moans, wondering if she can taste his pulse.
And you are my favorite person in the world for this. I quivered when I read it. Thanks.

I love this fic. It’s obvious, isn’t it? *lol*

And I finish because this comment is too long and, perhaps, a bit enthusiastic. But only a bit ;) I'm sorry.


that was just--I can't find a word that's good enough. something that means beautiful to the nth degree.

I think I've told you this before, but you and I have very similar views of who Seeley Booth is and how he feels he should behave toward women.

I don't know what they were trying to pull with his character at the beginning of Season 2 (2-timing Rebecca and Dr. Saroyan) after everything they showed us in Season 1--especially about his relationship w/Rebecca--but continuity has never been a strong suit of TV series. LOL

I love your stuff! Keep writing! Oh, and keep posting to naughty_bones! People keep forgetting about that community, and I don't like being the only one to post there! I don't think the person who started the community does, either! We need more people to post adult stuff there! *pout*

Wow. This was perfect to wake up to on a cold, snowy morning.

Perfection, as usual.

i gotta say it's all in the characters, and those 'subtle' moments, i really like those... nice!

and i love tori amos to bits, *hee*.

Fantastic. Perfect mix of emotion and hot, steamy goodness. I think you captured Booth's spirit really well in this. Excellent work.

when you preface with the word 'porn' it totally blows me away that this is what i end up reading. it was so beautiful. like... yeah, i can't even come up with anything intelligent this time, except for that it was really moving. and i love your characterization. and it was almost heartbreaking, but too heartwarming to allow it to be.

It's kinda sad and it's hot and it's got the possibility of a sequel (hint hint? :) and I love it and if I try any harder to make a coherent response, I'll probably explode.

GOD. You are the master at Booth/Brennan. I love you. Everything you write is amazing. I love how you make Booth so protective. He loves her. Deeply, truly loves her with all his heart and you make that happen with your words.

Thank you very much for your generous words; they've made me smile on a cold, wintry day.

I love how you make Booth so protective.

There's no doubt in my mind that he would die for her, kill for her, do whatever he had to for her.

He loves her.

Yes, he does.

Wow, that was completely, amazingly beautiful. I like what is said about the characters and how engaging it was while being all the more hot because of it. Awesome job.

Thank you! A story should be about characters—not two random people getting it on. Well, at least that's not how I wanted this to read. :)

What I want to know is: how you keep writing these on a daily basis with such perfect understanding of these characters? If we're stuck with only half a season, I'll just keep reading these instead. The WGA strike can have its up-side.

Many belated thanks, Sara. :) *hugs*

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I haven't been reading much fic lately, but I'm so glad I stopped in to read this one tonight. You are so dead-on with these characters, and you just keep getting better all the time - if that's even possible :)

I hope things are getting better for you *hugs*

You literally took my breath away!


Thanks, Kate, for taking the time to let me know this left you breathless.