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Fic: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (7/?)
B/B Mirror Mirror on the Wall - lerdo
only_more_love
Title: What Would Happen If We Kissed? (7/?)
Chapter Title: I Am Standing Up At the Water's Edge
Chapter: 7/? WIP
Characters: Brennan, Booth
Rating: T or PG-13
Word Count: 2011
Summary: Thoughts of Booth are keeping Brennan awake at night. Question is, what is she going to do about it? This story is set in Season 2, after Episode 11.
Spoilers:  Through 2x11
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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Prologue & Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6



very good! nice writing, and true to the characters!
I'd sure love to read more..... :-)

Thanks! Glad you liked this enough to want more. :)

heeeeeeeeeee!!!! omg, my prayes have reached your guardian angel, thank you very much!!!

but, aw, this is so bittersweet! I don't Bren being so unsure like she is. But, nevertheless this is great! keep up, keep up! or will I have to beg some more? lol!

Nope, no begging needed, though I'd be lying if I said I didn't love that you left me feedback. :)

I don't Bren being so unsure like she is.

I hear you.

Thank you very much for commenting.

I've just read this entire series for the first time and I love it. It stays so perfectly in character for both of them. I love how Booth is so persistent in not letting her insist this is impersonal and just sex and just once, for that matter. So well done. I can't wait for the next installment!

I'm beyond happy that you think Booth and Brennan are in character in this. Booth's no idiot. ;)

Thanks for letting me know you read this; that means a lot to me.

Oh wow! I just read the whole thing for the first time, and I'm really enjoying it! Your characterizations are great, and the smut is HOT! ;)

Hi there. :) Thanks! Glad you're digging this story.

:D I was so happy to see this story updated that I read the whole thing over again.

It had been a while since the previous update, so I can understand why you read the whole thing over again. I did the same thing before I sat down to write this chapter.

Thanks for dropping me a note to say you liked this. :)

There are so many people who write Bones fan fics that I have a hard time keeping up! So I just read all 6 chapters of the story in one day, and I loved them all!

You are such a amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future! :)

Yes, there certainly are plenty of Bones fics out there!

So pleased you enjoyed this. :) Many thanks for commenting and letting me know that.

I just got into the fandom not very long ago and some people recommended you :). I am really enjoying this and I hope you post the next chapter soon.

Hello, and welcome. :) I'm flattered someone recommended my stories. Glad you liked this; thanks for taking the time to tell me that. The next chapter is now up.

I've just red all 7 chapters, and must say they are reeeeaaaallllyyyy great! Now I'm so going to search for more of your stories ;)

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the first seven chapters. :)

How did I not know this fic was back?! Yay!

hee! are you familiar with the brief online interview with David where he was asked, "What's your favorite ice cream?" and he said, "On a woman's breast"? I'm not sure I got the question right, but...is that where you got the idea for the end of this chapter? just curious.

as to the rest of it, I'm loving the gentle seduction. he knows he's got to tread lightly with her--to seduce her when she's not looking, so to speak. good characterization!

Umm.... in my haste to read more, I may have been somewhat remiss? in my replies.

The smut scenes are wonderfully written. But then, you've always had a gift with words. And graphics. And everything else you touch. God, your child is going to have some super-cool genes.

This chapter was AMAZING. I loved how you didn't shift this into a "they slept together and realized it was love" fic, a route so easy to take. You're staying true to the characters in a the basest sense, keeping them 100% grounded.

I think Brennan would truly be conflicted over leaving or staying, and I think Booth would know she was conflicted. And they both KNOW their relationship has irrevicably shifted, but that may not be a bad thing.

Wonderful, fantastic work!

I just read all 7 chapters and it was so great. First the sex was hot, hot, hot, but more than that the interaction between them was exactly right. Loved it!!!