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Bones Fic: Unsaid, Unspoken (1/1)
L'ecrivez
only_more_love
Title: Unsaid, Unspoken
Rating:
T
Genre:  Drama/Friendship
Characters:  Booth, Brennan, Zack, Cam
Spoilers: Through 3x15: The Pain in the Heart
Summary: This is an episode tag/filler for The Pain in the Heart.
Feedback: is always appreciated. Thank you.
Word Count: 3,821
Disclaimer: Bones and its characters belong to FOX, not me. This story is purely meant to entertain. No copyright infringement is intended.

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What of the living had she missed because of her focus on the dead?

I love this piece of insight into Brennan's life.

This whole story was aching and lovely. Quiet, but so powerful at the same time. Lovely companion to the episode.

I love this piece of insight into Brennan's life.

I'm happy that sentence resonated with you.

Thank you so much for your comments; it feels like a gift, hearing how a story affected a reader.

Thank you for that fic, for writing the end I would have liked to see for the episode.

Thank YOU for taking the time to let me know how you felt about this story. ♥

Thank you for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

This is my show. This. Not the other stuff :(
Thank you for writing my season finale.

Besos

*hugs you* Thank you for generous comments.

Lovely, spot on look at Brennan's feelings and how she tries to make sense of what happened.

Before he was Gormogon’s apprentice, he was hers.

Perfect sentiment. (Also one of the reasons, they didn't convince me about Zack. I can't believe he'd ever jepoardize that relationship.)

Love her reaching out to Cam at then, realizing that they are all family and they need to mourn one of their own.

So many things about this ep just didn't make sense. *grumbles*

Lovely, spot on look at Brennan's feelings and how she tries to make sense of what happened.

Thank you very much. I'm glad this seemed true to Brennan.

(Also one of the reasons, they didn't convince me about Zack. I can't believe he'd ever jeopardize that relationship.)

Yes!

Love her reaching out to Cam at then, realizing that they are all family and they need to mourn one of their own.

Glad that aspect of the story worked for you; I felt it was important.

I'm curious to see how the show writers will deal with the fallout from this ep...

Thank you for writing this. If only the scene at the end had played this way. Not that anything would truly fix the episode, but this feels much more true to the emotional development of the characters than the way it played out on screen. I was lovely.

Not that anything would truly fix the episode

Totally agree with you.

but this feels much more true to the emotional development of the characters than the way it played out on screen.

That's honestly the most I could hope for. I'm thrilled if this story echoed the characters' emotional development. Many, many thanks to you for taking a moment to let me know that. I sincerely appreciate it.

That was beautiful, thank you so much for writing!
I saw the finale on Thursday, followed by the House finale, both of which were EPIC SADNESS. I watched both twice, so obviously I was a total emotional mess afterwards. (I had to go watch LotR at 2 A.M to cheer myself up again, lol)

I can't believe they did this to Zack, the lab's going to be severely lacking when he's not there.

I love how you depicted everything from Bren's worries about it being her fault and her fretting over still wanting to go see Zack. And lovely BB interaction! Just.. perfect.

That was beautiful, thank you so much for writing!

I'm very pleased you liked this. :) Thanks so much for taking a sec to comment and let me know how you felt about this story.

I watched both twice, so obviously I was a total emotional mess afterwards.

*g* I can only imagine. While I don't watch House, I heard the season finale was a tearjerker.

I can't believe they did this to Zack, the lab's going to be severely lacking when he's not there.

*nods head in agreement*

I love how you depicted everything from Bren's worries about it being her fault and her fretting over still wanting to go see Zack.

Thank you! In my world anyway, she'd be a mess of multiple and conflicting emotions as a result of recent events.

But she wasn't Angela, and she wasn't Booth, and this was the most she could give him right now.

I love the way you've captured Brennan. I believe this sums it up -- she's giving what she can, and he's taking whatever she can give.

Beautiful piece. Thank you.

I believe this sums it up -- she's giving what she can, and he's taking whatever she can give.

Yes. That's how I see them, anyway. :)

Thank you! Your comments are much appreciated.

It really should have ended like this.

Love the new banner by the way. Zach's hat always makes me laugh.

It really should have ended like this.

Thanks for the lovely comment. :)

Love the new banner by the way. Zach's hat always makes me laugh.

Thanks. That was such a beautiful moment for Zack and the entire team.

I still hate this episode. But this helps make things a little bit better.

I hear you; I'm not crazy about this episode either. All the more reason to write this fic.

But this helps make things a little bit better.

I'm glad this eased the pain a bit. Thanks for taking the time to comment and let me know that.

this was a wonderful fic. maybe i'm still all fuzzy with sorrow at rethinking about this episode, but this was one of the nicest fanfictions i've read in a long time. i can't really describe it, but reading this almost made me ache inside.

as someone who was incredibly disappointed with the way the writers handled the finale, i'm so glad that you chose to write this up. it was wonderful closure- you remained absolutely true to all the characters, and even their flaws were represented to a tee.
i'll stop rambling, but i truly have to say that this fic was lovely: it was both horrible, heartbreaking, and beautiful all in one.

i can't really describe it, but reading this almost made me ache inside.

Since I get what you're saying I'd say you described it just right. :)

it was wonderful closure- you remained absolutely true to all the characters, and even their flaws were represented to a tee.

Thank you so very much; I'm ecstatic that you thought I represented the characters faithfully, flaws and all.

You weren't rambling, and I truly appreciated reading how you felt about this story. Like you, I was disappointed by this episode. I'm pleased it offered you a bit of closure. Now let's see what the show writers do with the fallout next season.

Thanks again for your thoughtful comments. ♥

A lot of stuff went through my head when I read this, but may I just say, thank you. They have all come a long way together, and your emphasis on the TEAM and how this affects all of them was a pleasure to read. :o)

You're welcome; thank YOU for reading.

They have all come a long way together, and your emphasis on the TEAM and how this affects all of them was a pleasure to read.

That's beautiful; thanks. I'm thrilled this didn't read as pure B/B romance to you. I didn't want it to be that. You're absolutely right that these events will impact the entire team.

Some things you can always count on, your fic saying exactly what I'm thinking, but lack the eloquence to express is one of them. Dripping tears on my keyboard, and I'm sure I'm not alone in that. Exquisitely excruciating.

*hugshugshugs* Thank you so much for your generous praise; I'll treasure it and look back at it again and again on days when I feel like I suck. I'm beyond touched that you were so moved by this.