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Bones Drabble: Hemorrhage In My Hands
Uriah  - lerdo
Written for last_archangel for this drabble meme.  Click the link if you'd like to leave a prompt.

Title:   Hemorrhage In My Hands
Fandom:  Bones
Characters:  Hodgins, Angela
Word Count:  100
Spoilers:  Oblique references to The Pain in the Heart.
Timeline:  Set after The Pain in the Heart.
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Prompt:  None.  last_archangel just requested Hodgins/Angela.
Notes:  Keeping this to 100 words was tough.

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I feel like this drabble is a study in how to write drabbles. A lot of people have touched on what I wanted to comment on, but the onion/induced tears, ignoring the bleeding, never teaching him to drive, and the especially close Zack/Hodgins relationship all made me a little teary, which is nigh-impossible to accomplish in 100 words. Bravo.

That was heartbreaking. *love*

Guh, I feel like I haven't read any of your fic in forever. I'm having a catch-up evening :0)

It may be only 100 words, but you made every one of them count. (How'd I miss seeing this before?)

This is what I was trying to get at and couldn't - you did it beautifully. Brava.

I love how much emotion is packed in here.

after weeks of discussions and mourning for Zach you put it into two words: "You're bleeding."
Yes we are. Bleeding!